Well
I wish this tutorial would have come out sooner.
Yours truly,
HungryXylanthrope
Well
I wish this tutorial would have come out sooner.
Yours truly,
HungryXylanthrope
i really like ur username...i wish i would have taken the time to make a more creative name like urs haha (ps i am not joking.)
Good start
The beginning was good. You should evolve it or incorporate it into a game.
The ending voice-over was completely unnecessary and ruined it. Nobody here is interested in authors personal thoughts, unless they are a movie voice over. Let the movie speak for itself without explanation, that way people will interpret it differently. Now it's branded as unfinished product by the author himself.
With that said, what the author did so far was great, with a Hellsing feeling to it, and has a lot of potential.
I really like your profile picture. I'm trying to grow a beard like that.
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